Pages two and three are roughed out. I've a lot of dialog to fit in these next few pages, so I'm going to try something along the lines of this. There's a lot to go over in this little story time between Max and the Prince.
I'll do the clean-up here in a little bit. In the meantime, I'm hungry for a hamburger.
"All the ancient, classic fairy tales have always been scary and dark."
-- Helena Bonham Carter